Text : ''So here I was, Waiting For Lili, minding what she was wearing. As I was telling to myself that she was probably wearing her tinny beauty, I heard loud footsteps in the shadow. The Devil was back to swallow my foolish soul, because, you know, what else could I have done but sign for the eyes of that delicious creature? THE END.''
Pretty cool, better than the other. I think if you had the picture overlapped by some pieces of newspaper it might feel better, or having it on an angle.